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aoc46
May 14, 2018
     

#200
      For a lamp, more brightness and contrast would make it look more illuminating.

aoc46
May 15, 2018
     

#200
      Good exposure and focus for the camera, but no strong point of interest for the viewer to focus on.
Edited by Admin on May 15, 2018

aoc46
May 14, 2018
     

#200
      The image seems to be undecided about whether it wants to be a silhouette. Either way, so much white overwhelms the figure.

aoc46
May 14, 2018
     

#200
      More brightness, contrast in the flower would give it more pop; surrounding leaves are rather distracting.

aoc46
May 14, 2018
     

#200
      Very minimalist - maybe too much so.

aoc46
May 14, 2018
     

#200
      Nice detail in the flower, but the background is a bit distracting.

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      Would be better with more light on the people and goods, less behind them.

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      This may appeal to basketball fanatics, but I'd prefer to see a bit more action - a ball about to drop, a hand reaching up to dunk....

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      The action in this scene is with the guy about to throw - wish we could see more of him.

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      Like the 'pyramid' composition, but might crop a bit tighter, so the quilt fills the bottom of the frame and you lose the fall-off in the top corners. More brightness in the face would be good, too. (Being on a quilt, i thought those were sleeping pills.)

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      Interesting ornate buildings, but they compete with each other for attention. Might better make one or the other the 'star' of the shot.

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      Like the high-key, almost white-on-white, look but find the dark shape poking in distracting. Consider cropping or painting it out....

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      The contrast between the dark rectilinear shapes and the bright rounded one really makes this. Consider how to get rid of the clouds and shrubbery, which detract.

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      The bicycle is interesting and well-placed in the frame, but the background of buildings and people going away distracts from it.

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      very striking treatment, well-composed.

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      Great composition, very dramatic sky. Reduced exposure, plus enhancing shadows in post, might help make the light rays stand out more.

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      Like the interesting tower shadow, but the light direction that creates it also produces a distracting uniform flat illumination of all the buildings into the distance. A vignette centered on the shadow would help direct the eye into this area.
Edited on May 13, 2018

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      Like the rhythmic line of the flowers. Would be improved with less exposure; detail is lost in the blossoms, and there is no true black point.

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      Very nicely composed and shot; especially like the foreground rocks. Might consider darkening the beach a bit behind the bird to help emphasize the gull.
Edited on May 13, 2018

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      Like the curve and its minimal simplicity. I agree with all you say, but feel it could use a stronger point of visual focus - maybe a vehicle just coming into view at the start of the curve.

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      Well-shot technically, as befits an homage to Adams. Note how his bottom leaves descend in size and are arranged in a rhythmic rotation that reflects the round shape of the upper one.

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      Nicely composed and captured shot of a typical (cool) day at the beach. Like the reflection on the wet sand.

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      Interesting subject, well-composed - could be improved with tighter crop, more contrast (esp. stronger blacks).

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      Interesting subject, well-composed. Hands may be a bit under-exposed. Would be even better if one finger were caught plucking a string.

aoc46
May 13, 2018
     

#200
      An interesting subject, but the over-exposed leaves draw the subject away from it.

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