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  #170 Rule of Thirds, Again
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Harbor Morning       ©2016 davemisunas
Panasonic DMC-FZ1000       15th place, 50 points
1/639s, f3.9, ISO 125, 150mm, Landscape, Pattern, no flash
 
Post-Processing: crop.. saturate.. contrast.. resize       Extra Info: None
 
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aoc46
Apr 19, 2016
    This should have placed higher, and it's partly my fault. I accidentally omitted it from my Favorites when voting - probably would have had it 4th or 5th. Sorry!

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davemisunas
Apr 18, 2016
    Thank you 'all' for your comments.... I agree with them... hull and shirt are flat just short of being blown-out... also got carried away with the 1/3 rule placing boat very close to the left edge (placed close to bottom to keep as much of the boats trail as possible)... did not have the luxury of time as this was a quick shot while walking the bridge over the harbor... so missed the best exposer and where she was looking.

Lo
Apr 18, 2016
    Nice use of rule of thirds. I like the relaxed posture as the boat glides backward.

rd52
Apr 18, 2016
    Your photo is a classic example of rule of thirds, but I don't like the blown out whites. It is hard to get the exposure right on the boat and get the rest of the pic right. Maybe under expose slightly and bring up the shadows in post processing. GL.

forkcandles
Apr 17, 2016
    like the idea with the wash but the single sculls is in the wrong place.
maybe a space is needed at the bottom with the right hand oar in the middle.
possible to flip the image

Old Finn
Apr 17, 2016
    In my opinion the kayak is too near of the corner of the picture.

Anthony Comyn
Apr 16, 2016
    The lighting at this angle could work if she was facing you. But the strong highlight on the boat and side of her shirt is a bit flat (no tonal range in that area). I think the subject is also a little too close to the edges of the frame, possible sighting more up and right would have been better.

babysister
Apr 15, 2016
    Simple and effective. I like it and right on theme.

aoc46
Apr 15, 2016
    Nice job of achieving "Rule of Thirds" balance without slavishly adhering to it. Like the simplicity of the design and colors. Very well done!

SteveBee
Apr 15, 2016
    An unconventional composition choice. Not sure how well it works with sight lines and subject heading out of frame.
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